To Give is to Receive
On Christmas Eve ten-year old
Samantha stood at the door of the homeless shelter while her mother dropped off
the box of toys Samantha used to own. Samantha held tight to Barkus, her
floppy-eared, brown stuffed dog.
As she waited, a young boy
came up to Samantha. The boy looked longingly at Barkus. Samantha held the
puppy even tighter as she examined the child. His mussed blonde hair and
mismatched clothes caused her to loosen the grip on Barkus. The boy reached for
the dog. Samantha hesitated, and then his eyes widened as she handed him her cherished
toy. He grabbed Barkus with one arm and wrapped the other one around Samantha.
She hugged the little boy in return. He let go of her, smiled at her with the
biggest smile she’d ever seen, and then ran off – with Barkus – across the
room.
Unknown to Samantha, her mom
had been watching. She wiped a tear from Samantha’s cheek, took Samantha’s hand
and squeezed it as they left the shelter, telling her, “I’m so proud of you.”
That night Samantha struggled
to go to sleep without Barkus until she remembered the feel of the boy’s hug
and the smile on his face.
The next morning, Christmas
day, Samantha woke up to a strange sound. She thought she heard barking. She
threw off her covers, and ran down the stairs. There at the foot of the stairs
was a real, floppy-eared brown puppy. Samantha scooped up the puppy and cried,
“It’s Barkus!”
This is an entry for Susanna Hill's Holiday contest. It has to be for children, about a surprise and limited to 250 words - excluding the title. I have used exactly 250 words.
This is so sweet and uplifting. It's a tale that will mean something to all children everywhere. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jill! (I wrote this a while ago, but didn't post it as a reply, so I am not sure if you ever saw it!!)
DeleteThanks again!!
Wonderful lesson for us all and it ends well too :)
ReplyDeletebest of luck to you, Colleen.
Thanks Vicki! Good luck to you as well! Can you give me a link to your entry if you have one??
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Thanks for asking and for reading :)
Yes this is a good story, especially if i get emotional. Well done.
ReplyDeleteIt sounded good when I first wrote it. Lol. All the stories are well told. Thank you for stopping by and checking out mine.
DeleteThis is a true Christmas story. How very thoughtful and sweet.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kathy!
DeleteHeartwarming. I like the surprise ending. Good luck in the contest.
ReplyDeleteThank you Angela! Good luck to you if you entered. And if you did, can you please provide a link to your story?
DeleteWhat a lovely story! Thank you for creating it. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading it and for your kind comments!
DeleteI LOVE this! What a terrific twist.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jean! If you entered, please give me your link!
DeleteA lovely story that really captures the spirit of Christmas. I love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you Carol Ann. I would love to read your entry if you could give me your link.
DeleteSo sweet! I know a lot of dog crazy kids who would love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rebekah! Can you please send me the link to your entry?
DeleteVery sweet, Colleen! And a perfect surprise. Love that Barkus is already living up to his name. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Delfina! Please leave your link so I can read your entry!
ReplyDeleteAww, thanks for your interest, Colleen! Here's the link to mine: http://www.delfinasalimbene.com/single-post/2017/12/02/Holiday-Contest-for-Childrens-Writers
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteA tender holiday story. Barkus is such a cute name, and finally he can live up to it when it belongs to a real dog. A sweet Christmas surprise.
ReplyDeleteMy middle daughter, now 25, still has her Barkus. Thanks for stopping by! I would love to read your entry if you could leave the link!
DeleteBarkus is a great name for a puppy, plush or real. Great story. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gregory! Do you have a link for your entry?
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ReplyDeleteTried to comment from the wrong account last night. LOVELY story. It's always hard to give up our prized things. I'm glad Samantha is rewarded at the end.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Mishka! I am glad you liked the story. Please stop back in and give me a link to your story too!!
DeleteAw! What a lovely story about the true meaning of Christmas, Colleen. So selfless of Samantha, and her kindness was rewarded. Thank you for this sweet story!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by to read it Susanna and thank you for all of your hard work! It seems the Halloween contest just ended!
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