Let Go
I ask myself, “Why should I care
what others think of me?”
If they don’t like the clothes I wear,
I ask myself, “Why should I care?"
I’ll sing to no one if I dare;
too insecure are we.
I ask myself, “Why should I care
what others think of me?”
A Triolet Poem. 8 lines with two rhymes. 5 of the 8 lines are repeated lines. First line repeats at the 4th and 7th lines. Second line repeats at the 8th line.
A
B
a - Rhymes with 1st line.
A - Identical to 1st line.
a - Rhymes with 1st line.
b - Rhymes with 2nd line.
A - Identical to 1st line.
B - Identical to 2nd line.
In the meantime, enjoy the responses I have made to other prompts.
Monday, October 10, 2011
Thursday, October 6, 2011
A Shadorma poem
Just Wondering
Why are we
Often reluctant
To offer
Each other
Something as free and catching
As a friendly smile?
The Shadorma poem has 6 lines. The syllable count is 3/5/3/3/7/5. Rhyme and meter are not required.
Image: http://vladimirbulgaru.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/baby-smile.jpg
Saturday, October 1, 2011
Ode to Sleep
You draw the curtains on my day
And let my mind’s subconscious play,
Transposing thoughts to play a part
In dreams that look like abstract art.
Oh how I welcome your relief,
Though slow to come, and oft too brief,
As consciousness is loath to cede,
Regardless of how hard I plead.
But yield it must: give up control!
I earned the rest; I’ve paid my toll.
Oh sleep, sweet sleep come visit me
And set my troubled psyche free!
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