Let Go
I ask myself, “Why should I care
what others think of me?”
If they don’t like the clothes I wear,
I ask myself, “Why should I care?"
I’ll sing to no one if I dare;
too insecure are we.
I ask myself, “Why should I care
what others think of me?”
A Triolet Poem. 8 lines with two rhymes. 5 of the 8 lines are repeated lines. First line repeats at the 4th and 7th lines. Second line repeats at the 8th line.
A
B
a - Rhymes with 1st line.
A - Identical to 1st line.
a - Rhymes with 1st line.
b - Rhymes with 2nd line.
A - Identical to 1st line.
B - Identical to 2nd line.
celticsea,
ReplyDeleteVery nicely placed words and sentiments too!!
Be yourself......
Eileen
Well said!
ReplyDeleteMadeleine Begun Kane
I just stopped by to congratulate you. You won an Honorable Mention in last week's Limerick-Off: Limerick of the Week 32.
ReplyDeleteI've just posted a new Limerick-Off and hope to see you there!
How are you today?
ReplyDeleteHappy end of November!
Appreciated your support to our poetry picnic,
Hope to see you share today,
A random poem or old poem will do the wonders too.
Your talent rocks.
Hope to see you in.
xoxox